Rationale

Sydney Ernst

English 102

Dr. Begert

November 27, 2014

The Destruction of Technology: Rationale

            I will first start my paper off by giving a brief introduction to what brought me onto writing this topic (the destruction of social networking) and sharing my thesis.  I will have two main points in my introduction and each will include supporting details on the matter.  I want to engage my readers and have them know right off the bat when reading my paper, why this is such an important issue to me.  Since this is my first research paper, I want to make sure I meet all the goals and requirements needed in a well thought out paper.  My paper will include sources from other scholars in the field and provided feedback from them.  Not only will my paper include direct quotations from these journalists, but some paraphrased material based on what I gathered and took from their writing.  A lot of people fail to make known what their thesis is so I want to be sure to succeed and clarify my thesis towards the end of my introduction for readers.  Doing so will allow my readers to have a better understanding where I am coming from and will meet their expectations.

            In my first main body paragraph, I will go into depth on the rise of technology and what society has become accustomed to.  My timeline will include the dramatic increase in this past decade and will use my sources to show that.  Once I give reason as to how and why we have allowed our phones to become our security blanket, I will provide a study of what our world’s population will be like in 2015 with technology.  People from all over, the U.S. especially, has allowed technology to get out of hand.  We have developed bad and rude habits with the obsession of our phones and etc.  Kids today feel it is okay to have an addiction and are facing serious problems because of it.  This first main paragraph will help give a generalization as to how out of control technology has gotten. 

            The second body paragraph will be the overuse of technology today and how it gradually increases more and more every day.  This paragraph will first start off with today’s new form of communication compared to how communication with one another was a decade ago.  Comparing the two will help readers understand the bigger picture and realize how much times have changed.  Towards the end of this paragraph, I will go onto give signs that show you are addicted to your phone and ways to help your addiction.  I felt this would be a good illustration towards my readers and would help open their eyes to what society has become like. 

            My next paragraph will include both the pros and cons of technology, more so the cons.  When deciding to choose this category to be part of my paper, I wanted readers to understand that I am not bashing technology in any way.  I love technology just as much as everyone else.  The problem being is I love it a little too much.  Technology has gotten so out of hand, it is everywhere!  Although I believe technology is helpful at times, I feel we revolve around it way too much.  This section will include voids filled when using technology and the obsession of it with the help from my sources.  My last source used in this paragraph, will really hook readers in due to the story that follows.  I am aiming to have them really engaged in and want to know more about what technology has done to us all.

            My last category expresses the dangers that follow with the excessive amount of time spent on cell phones.  I will first bring in the biggest danger of them all when it comes to our phones which is texting while driving.  In other words called the new, “drunk driving.”  I am bringing this into my paper because it needs to be brought to people’s attention.  Many people have died or been injured due to texting while driving.  We have let this get so out of hand that lives are being put at stake.  Also include with this section was the dangerous sites that have come about online.  I want readers to see just how dangerous a lot of the social world has become and how not everything you go on is safe.  A real eye opener should be brought about when reading this section of the paper.   

            In this last paragraph before I wrapped it all up, I wanted to pull in some real life experiences occurred in my life.  I will first go onto talk about my younger brother and how much technology has affected him.  What I hope to gain from doing so is for people to realize just how much of a guilty party my family and I play into this.  Technology has taken over all of us and that is really sad to say.  I want readers to maybe take a step back and think about what role models they are being to their younger family members. 

            My conclusion paragraph will reel in everything mentioned in my research paper.    Again as mentioned before, it isn’t my intention to bash technology.  That wasn’t my reasoning for writing this paper.  I just want society to go back to a life to where staring at a screen all day isn’t normal.  Technology is corrupting us and pulling us away from each other.

Outline

Outline

       I.            Introduction: Brief description of my topic, followed by my thesis.

a.)    Technology slowly corrupting us.

i.)                  Today’s world once managed without social networking and cell phones.  I am not saying the world should go back to that again, but needs to be done in moderation.  (Shawn Ghuman)

b.)    Technology has had a rapid growth over the past decade.

i.)                  Due to the excessive use of technology, many sites have come about that are dangerous and unsafe for teens to go on.  (Julia Angwin)

    II.            The extreme rise in technology.

a.)    We as a society have allowed our phones to become our security blanket. (Ghuman)

i.)                  Everywhere you go nowadays, people seem to be attached to their phones, rather than engaging in conversation with those around them.

ii.)                Recently discovering that being on your phone nonstop is a rude habit to have.

b.)    Technology as we know it, is taking over.

i.)                  Studies show that by 2015, 80% of the world’s population will have a smartphone, tablet, or laptop.

ii.)                Social addicts are beginning to experience withdrawal from being away from technology. (Larry Rosen)

1.)    The after affects with kids not able to have their phone nearby at all times.

 III.            The overuse of technology that begins to increase more and more as time goes on.

a.)    Society had become so caught up in technology and the overuse of cell phones has become outrageous.  We have allowed a new way of communication to come into play and problems are now resulting because of it.  (Ashton Kutcher)

i.)                  Relationships are being destroyed and we are beginning to shut people out.

ii.)                The social media world is growing upon us more and more each day.

1.)    One of the more popular social networking sites; Facebook, has now reached a stopping point.  There no longer seems to be a rapid growth anymore due to the fact that people have already joined from all over the world.

b.)    The four signs of being addicted to your cell phone. (Tonya Mosley)

i.)                  Finding myself in the midst of cell phone addiction.

ii.)                Ways to seek help towards your cell phone addiction, yet still be able to enjoy time on your phone here and there.

 IV.            The pros and cons of technology.

a.)    A void is filled when communicating online or through text.  People feel accepted and feel they can be whoever they want to be.

b.)    The obsession we have developed for our cell phones and social networking. (Robert Piper)

i.)                  Even though we are starting to realize our obsession, we as a society are finding it difficult to take a step back and not be so addicted to something so meaningless.

ii.)                Phones are one of the biggest distractions.

c.)    The social world was once a good thing, but has now started making a turn for the worse.  (Emma Stein)

i.)                  The need to take the perfect “selfies” gone wrong.

ii.)                Society’s contribution towards this obsession.

    V.            The dangers that follow with the excessive amount of time spent on cell phones. 

a.)    Texting while driving now declared as the new “drunk driving.”

i.)                  Texting while driving has become one of the most cause for accidents in the U.S. (Stephanie Hanes)

ii.)                Survey done on those who texts behind the wheel and passengers in the car being a witness to those texting while driving.  (Ashley Halsey)

b.)    The world is becoming a dangerous place to include the social world.

i.)                  Teens are starting to find themselves in trouble due to the newer sites coming about.

ii.)                Some people online fake their identity and toy with other people’s emotions.

 VI.            Going out should have its own new meaning now.

a.)    My brother’s need to be on his iPad at all times, even at dinner.

i.)                  The examples he is being shown and the habits he is starting to pick up.

ii.)                Kids are becoming sucked into a world where they feel it is okay to not carry on face-to-face conversations.

b.)    Being on our phones 24/7 isn’t necessary.

i.)                  It shows disrespect to the person you’re with when you are on your phone the whole time, instead of interacting with them.

VII.           We have led society to become overruled by technology.

a.)    We have each in our own way contributed to how today’s world is.  Rather than fix the problem, we complain and still buy the products.

i.)                  Technology shouldn’t be completely cut off, but we shouldn’t allow it to be our main priority any longer.

Abstract

Technology has begun to make a turn for the worse.  We have begun to get so caught up in something so meaningless.  We as a society are beginning to choose technology, over more important things in life.  It’s crazy to think how much has changed in this past decade and how fast technology has surpassed the human generation.  Today’s generation would be in for a rude awakening if technology somehow disappeared.  Society relies so much on technology today that in a way, we don’t need to think.  Technology is our own brain in a sense and that is becoming discouraging when given the time to think about it.  What are we gaining from spending hours upon hours staring at a screen?  Our brains aren’t having the ability to engage and problems will later be faced, if not now.  Every problem we face, we seem to rely on technology more and more these days.  For instance, we need a break from studying so we check our Facebook.  Another example, being stuck in an awkward situation leading us to pulling out our phones making us feel like the situation isn’t as weird.  It makes you wonder how people once survived back then, right?  This isn’t how society should be, this isn’t how it should have become.  The unfortunate part about it is we have let this happen.  The U.S. has allowed technology to rise drastically.  The sources gathered for my topic include the rise in technology, the overuse, the pros and cons, and the dangers that come along with social networking.  My plan isn’t to bash technology, but to cut down a bit and not allow our lives to revolve so much around something so little.    

Drafting Process

            

        Whether we choose to believe it or not, technology has become in a sense a form of addiction.  Social networking has become very popular over this past decade, more so in the last five years.  A lot of people, today’s generation especially, seem to fill a void when going online and texting.  The social world is not safe in today’s world.  It has become very dangerous and caused a lot of pain in people’s lives.  People have gotten so caught up with what is going on in the social world rather than face reality and experience the real world.  I look around and see everyone hooked on their phone rather than carry on face-to-face conversations with the company they are with.  I’ve caught myself even out to dinner with family and friends and not being able to put my phone down for that short amount of time out of the day that should be spent with one another.  People, teens especially are having trouble carrying conversations because they don’t have the time to come up with something witty to whereas during text or online, they would.  During face-to-face conversations, it is completely different though.  Once you say something, you no longer have the ability to erase what you said and start over.  Society isn’t what it used to be anymore.  We have allowed technology to corrupt us and take over who we are- who we once were.   After reading my paper, you will have learned about the extreme rise in technology, the overuse of it, the pros and cons, and lastly the dangers that follow with the excessive amount of time spent on our phones.

            For starters, social media now has its own meaning.  It was once something fun and now has become an addiction.  The excessive use of technology has created many issues in today’s society.  You can’t seem to go out to dinner without seeing people glued to their phones.  That’s not all either.  People are always on their phone.  Whether it is at the movies, in class, at the store, you are always seeing at least a handful of people on their phone.  I never really realized until recently that being glued to your phone even with company, is a rude habit to have.  Unfortunately enough for me, I had to learn the hard way (a couple times at that).  Shawn Ghuman’s “Is Technology Destroying Social Bonds?” in America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals, provided me with a lot of “back up” with how I feel towards technology and social networking.  Ghuman gave a great example and referred to cell phones as our security blanket.  In Shawn Ghuman’s reading, he said “Digital communication has taken away from what makes humans thrive- the ability to express thoughts through in-person discussion.”  When reading Ghuman’s piece, I found myself agreeing with everything he said and wanting to spit it all out on my paper.  We as humans, have now started to become socially awkward with one another.  It has become harder for us to make eye contact with those we talk to and have trouble keeping a nice flow during the conversation.  Technology as we know it, is taking over.  Larry Rosen’s iDisorder: Understanding Our Obsession With Technology And Overcoming Its Hold On Us, gives an expert testimony in the field of Psychology of Technology.  He goes onto say how technology is too much for the human mind to handle.  While reading this book, I found something that caught my interest.  It is predicted by experts, that in the year 2015, 80% of the world’s population will have a smartphone, tablet, or laptop.  How crazy is that?  Rosen stated that social addicts experience withdrawal from being away from technology.  They have an itch for more and experience anger, depression and/or anxiety.  Larry Rosen says studies show, “Kids with text-message dependency will experience nervousness when they do not have their cell phones with them.”  Is that how we react without our phones now?  Society as we know it is spiraling down into one big mess.

            Secondly, technology has become overused more as time goes on.  For starters, Ashton Kutcher’s “Has Texting Killed Romance?” in America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals, lists the overuse and a from then to now on how the social world has become today.  Actor and producer, Kutcher, shares his thoughts on how cell phones and texting have become at an all-time high.  He goes onto say, “With all this texting, e-mailing, and social networking, I started wondering, are we all becoming so in touch with one another that we are in danger of losing touch?”  In Ashton Kutcher’s reading, he goes on about how it once use to be a boy and girl met, exchanged numbers, anticipation built, call was made, then went from there.  Now instead of calling, we text because silence over the phone is eliminated.  Instead of going over and comforting the person you care for, you send a sweet touching text or write on their Facebook wall, etc.  Society has become so caught up in technology and the overuse of cell phones has become outrageous.  We have begun to let it reel us in and now are facing problems because of it.  Relationships with those we care about are being destroyed because of us pushing those away.  We are shutting people out as if it is nothing.  As if our phones have more of an importance than our loved ones.   The social media world is slowly growing upon us more and more every day.  Cristian Lupsa’s “A Campus Fad Becomes A Fact…” goes onto give reasons as to why Facebook is no longer growing.  The famous social networking site doesn’t seem to be having a rapid growth like how it once was because everyone seems to already be on it.  It blows my mind at times to see how quickly the site has begun to grow.  I came across an article on the Seattle Refined that caught my eye and pulled me into reading more.  Tonya Mosley’s post “4 Signs You’re Addicted to Your Cell Phone” gives a great description on what the overuse has now led up to.  The sad part is, I played a guilty part in this matter.  Each one of those signs seemed to have some relationship with me.  Not only did Mosley list the signs of your addiction, but she provided was to seek help with your addiction towards your fun.  Seems silly to have an addiction with your phone, right?  In reality though, it isn’t healthy at all to become so wrapped up in something so meaningless. 

            When social networking first came about, it was supposed to be something you checked every now and then like your Facebook for example.  Social networking sites were there to allow you to connect with friends and family and still keep in touch with one another.  Speaking to this issue, several sources develop the pros and cons of technology and how different today’s world is because of it.  Christine Rosen’s “Electronic Intimacy” in America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals, shares her feelings on the pros and cons of social networking and what an addiction it has become.  Roses begins to wonder, “Might texting, emailing, and tweeting eventually have the same delirious effect on, for instance, our ability to experience longing?”  As said before, people seem to fill a void when communicating online or through text with someone.  They feel accepted rather than rejected because they don’t have to be themselves.  People can pretend to be someone completely different from who they actually are, and that is scary when thinking about it.  What have we let society become?  Robert Piper’s article “Your Cell Phone Is Not A Part Of Your Body-You Can Let It Go” for example, relates and links to more of the con side of cell phones and how obsessed we have become with social networking.  We are all starting to realize the obsession we have, but have yet to do anything about it and are struggling to step back a little.  A lot of today’s society, myself included have become glued to their cell phones.  I am constantly checking my phone and it has become the biggest distraction.  An article from Huffpost, brought up an issue I wasn’t aware of.  Emma Stein’s “Is Social Media Dependence A Mental Issue?” brought to my attention, the killing of a 19 year old boy in the UK.  He had become so obsessed with taking “selfies” that he decided to commit suicide.  He had an addiction and felt he had to get the perfect picture.  The 19 year old would change the way he looked from the color of his hair to his weight.  We as a society have helped contribute to this.  Emma began to give her reasons as to why she feels technology and the social world were once a good thing, but now turning out to be bad.  The social media world is not all what it is cracked up to be anymore.

            My next category includes the dangers that follow with the excessive amount of time spent on cell phones.  We have begun to hear it all.  Texting while driving, cyber bullying, unsafe sites, and more have all become dangerous to us.  As you know, there have been many accidents caused due to texting while driving.  Nowadays, texting while driving is the new “drunk driving.”  It has become just as bad, if not worse.  Stephanie Hanes and Ashley Halsey both wrote articles on texting while driving and the affects of it today.  In Hanes’ article “Texting Caused Total ‘Distracted Driving’ Deaths To Rise, Study Finds,” goes onto give the dangers of texting while driving and how it has now become the most cause for accidents here in the U.S.  In Halsey’s article “U.S. Teens Frightening Levels of Texting While Driving,” goes onto provide more of a survey type aspect.  “A quarter of teens say they text while driving and about half ages 12-17, say they have been in cars with someone texting behind the wheel.”  Think about what a kid in elementary or middle school begins to think when they see that being done.  They are going to think it is alright and okay to do.  The world is becoming a dangerous place, to include the social world.  More and more dangerous sites are starting to come about and some teens are finding themselves in trouble because of it.  Whether it be done unintentional or not, there are a lot of people out there who fake their identity.  People’s emotions are not something that should be messed with. 

            Going out should have its own meaning now.  The reason I bring this up, is for many reasons.  My ten year old brother has had an iPad for a couple years now.  Although yes there are some beneficial things to having an iPad, there is a fine line between when enough is enough.  Or so it should be.  Every time we go out to dinner, he is glued to his iPad.  It is like he is in his own little world and doesn’t want to be messed with.  My parents will tell him to put it away, but all he does and goes on and pitches a fit.  Then I began to think to myself.  The first thing my dad and I do after looking through the menu is pull out our phones.  What are we teaching my brother by pulling out our phones rather than talking with one another?  Kids are becoming sucked into a world where they feel it is okay to not carry face-to-face conversations with others around them.  We can’t really blame them though, because that is what a lot of them are becoming use to being around.  I have really started to struggle with how our world has become.  It has made me come to realize just how disrespectful it is to pull out your phone while spending time with someone.  The excessive texting, tweeting, and updating your status on Facebook isn’t worth as much time that is put into it.  There can be many other useful things you can do.  I understand we all need our down time to ourselves and that is fine.  But being on our phones and on technology 24/7 isn’t necessary. 

            In conclusion, I hope once you are done reading this, you understand my reasoning for why I chose this topic in the first place.  A lot of people complain about what technology has begun to do to society, but in reality it is the people that have led society to become this way.  We have all somehow contributed to how the world is today.  There are many problems that have arouse because how people, myself included have let technology take over.  I don’t feel we should cut technology completely out, that isn’t my intention and what I hope for.  It just shouldn’t take up as much of our time and be our main priority.  My paper helps show the rapid growth of technology and the takeover that has begun.  

In Class Lab: Rough Draft Workshop

Rough Draft Workshop

1.      My topic is the extreme rise in technology and how it has affected society today.

2.      Technology was my larger subject area. 

3.      In the beginning I had a hard time at first narrowing my topic down.  It was such a broad topic, but now I have been able to narrow it down to the obsession with social networking and how people cannot seem to stay off their phones.

4.      I searched peer reviewed articles along with collecting information from a couple books.  I was able to get a hold of some useful information for my sources to help back up my argument. 

5.      There are a lot of mixed answers when it comes to how people feel about technology and the rapid rise that has begun.  There are also people that are in the middle and feel there are both pros and cons that attribute to technology.

Main areas leading towards this argument is the statistics of students’ grades and the loss of communication between one another.  Students in school today are beginning to see a decrease in their grades because of the addiction with feeling they need to be on social media sites at all times, as well as texting, and etc.  Everywhere you go there seems to be no such thing as face to face communication anymore.  For example, take a look around when you go out to dinner.  Count how many people are actually conversing with one another rather than be wrapped up in their cell phones.

There isn’t one specific group involved in the talk of technology today.  You have today’s generation as well as family members and friends of theirs that join in on the conversation and give their input.

6.      I have yet to start my draft yet so I’m not sure how many words there are yet.  I just completed my review of literature and hope to now have the chance to get started on my draft for Tuesday’s workshop.

Literature Review

Whether we choose to believe it or not, technology has become in a sense a form of addiction.  Social networking has become very popular over this past decade, more so in the last five years.  A lot of people, today's generation especially, seem to fill a void when going online and texting.  People have gotten so caught up with what's going on in the social world rather than face reality and experience the real world. Nowadays you go out to eat at a restaurant and you begin to wonder *What's the point really?*  I look around and see everyone hooked on their phones rather than carry on conversations with the company they are with.  I've caught myself even out to dinner with family/friends and not being able to put my phone down for that short amount of time out of the day that should be spent with one another.  People, teens especially are having trouble carrying conversations because they don't have that time to come up with something witty to where as during text or online, they would.  During face to face conversations, it is completely opposite though.  Once you say something, you can't erase it and start over.  You no longer have that ability.  Sources for this topic fell into the category; extreme rise in technology, overuse, pros and cons, and lastly the dangers that follow with the excessive amount of time spent on our phones.  Many sources fell into the extreme rise in the technology category.  For instance Shawn Ghuman’s "Is Technology Destroying Social Bonds?" in America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals, which goes onto tell the drastic change over the past decade regarding technology.  Social media has its own new meaning now.  It was once something fun and has now become an addiction.  The excessive use of technology has created many issues in today's society.  You can't seem to go out to dinner without seeing people glued to their phone.  Conversations become awkward because people just aren't use to having a face to face discussion with someone.  Technology as we know it, is taking over.  Another article in this category is Larry Rosen’s iDisorder: Understanding Our Obsession With Technology And Overcoming Its Hold On Us.  Larry Rosen is an expert specifically in the field of Psychology of Technology.  He goes onto say how technology is too much for the human mind to handle.  This book will be useful to my paper because almost every chapter links up and clicks with what I hope to gain from my research.  In the Elite Daily the Voice of Generation-Y “How Technology Continues to Destroy A Social Generation,” Yasmin Hassan, listed the destruction in today’s society due to technology and what the social world is allowing.  In Hassan's article, I at first thought I would gain a lot from her thoughts and what she had to say.  Although I agree with some of the things mentioned, I feel it won't contribute a whole lot towards my paper.  Richard Alleyne’s article, The Telegraph “Mobile Phone Addiction Ruining Relationships” hits another point on how technology is rising more and more every day.  Alleyne's article will be useful towards my paper because his thoughts are aligned a lot with mine.  All sorts of relationships are slowly being destroyed due to the addiction people have started to have with their cell phones.  Today’s world is completely different from how it was once a decade ago.  Nowadays we have to worry about what kids’ today are doing on their phones.  Kelly Wallace’s article Digital Life "How to Cut Your Kids' Cell Phone Addiction" is a prime example of what today’s generation revolves around.  At first, I was a little skeptical of this article.  After reading it though I came across a few different types of cell phone addictions.  One was on a five year old who doesn't even have one, but would live on it if she could.  The constant looking over her friends shoulders as they played games or checked their Instagram.  My ten year old brother can't seem to get off his iPad wherever we go.  He has been begging for a phone (iPhone more so), for over a year now.  Is that what this world has come to?  Society is being taken over and people are failing to realize it.  I plan to get my point across when writing my paper.  My last topic really fits this category statistic wise.  Honor Whiteman’s article "Is Cell Phone Addiction On The Horizon?” does a great job with pertaining to my topic.  Whiteman goes onto say studies show that 60% of high school students admit to being addicted to their cell phones and become frustrated when it is not nearby.  This source will be helpful towards my paper because I can use calculations provided on the addictions of cell phone use and how addiction is no longer just a term used for drugs and alcohol.   

            Secondly, technology has become overused more as time goes on.  For starters, Ashton Kutcher’s "Has Texting Killed Romance?" America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals, lists the overuse and a from then to now on how the social world has become today. Actor, producer, and co-founder of Katalyst Media, Ashton Kutcher shares his thoughts on how cell phones and texting have become at an all-time high.  Kutcher goes onto say that it used to be a boy and a girl met, exchanged numbers, anticipation built, call was made, had hours upon hours of conversation over the phone, then a date was arranged and went from there.  Now instead of calling, we text because silence over the phone is eliminated.  Instead of going over and comforting the person you care for, you send a sweet touching text or write on their Facebook wall, etc.  Society has become so caught up in technology and the overuse of cell phones and I plan to prove that.  Another article that fits this category is Mark Glasser’s MediaShift Your Guide to the Digital Media Revolution “How Cell Phones Are Killing Face-to-Face Conversations” which has now become a problem in society today.  Mark Glasser's article will contribute a lot of useful information towards my paper with his thoughts on how are conversations are slowly being killed with one another due to the use of technology.  Iydiaborah’s blog “Is Technology Taking Over?” in Digital Media fits this category fairly well because technology as we know it, is taking over in a since.  We are beginning to get so caught up in the social world that we shut everyone else out.  In Iydiaborah's blog, a few points hit on my topic, but for the most part I didn't feel overly confident about using this source towards my paper.  If I were to use this source, it would be one of my last options.  The social media world is slowly growing upon us more and more every day.  Cristian Lupsa’s "A Campus Fad Becomes A Fact...” goes onto give reasons as to why Facebook is no longer growing.  The famous social networking site; Facebook, doesn't seem to be having a rapid growth like how it once was because everyone seems to already be on it.  Links right up with one of the main social networking sites I plan on including in my paper.  In Anna Almendrala’s article “Our Creepy Attachment to Cell Phone Could Be an Addiction” on Huffpost, provided me with just how addicted people are becoming with their phone and how they can’t even put it down for a couple hours.  Almendrala made some good points on the excessive use of cell phones.  One of her examples given was about students paying all this money for classes, and spending all their time on their phones rather than listen to their professor.  I can use this towards my paper when explaining the disrespect that goes along with being on your phone 24/7.  One of the last articles for the overuse category, Ellen Augenbraun’s “How Real A Risk Is Social Media Addiction” on CBS news talks about the symptoms of social media addiction, especially leading towards Facebook.  Some things mentioned in the article, the symptoms for example can be useful towards my paper.  The rest of the information didn't seem like it would be that helpful when it comes down to arguing my point.  Tonya Mosley’s post “4 Signs You’re Addicted to Your Cell Phone” gives a great description on what the overuse now has led up to.   I like how the article in Seattle Refined, gave four signs of being addicted to your cell phone because, well I was guilty in this matter.  Each sign described exactly what I do and although I laughed, it isn't funny when it comes down to it.  This source will be effective towards my paper because I will be able to bring the signs of addiction in with my arg’ument as well as ways listed to help the addiction. 

            When social networking first came about, it was supposed to be something you checked every now and then like your Facebook for example.  Social networking sites were there to allow you to connect with family and friends and still be able to connect with one another.  This next category consists of the pros and cons of technology and how different today’s world is because of it.  Christine Rosen’s “Electronic Intimacy” in America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals, shares her feelings on the pros and cons of social networking and what an addiction it has become.  I am beginning to catch myself getting caught up in what seems to be so little of a problem, but in reality is escalating into an issue that can destroy us.  I plan to use Rosen's piece and tie it into my thoughts.  I had came across a couple more sources relating to this category and recently discovered cell phones and social networking are more of a con than a pro more so today.  For instance, Robert Piper’s article "Your Cell Phone Is Not A Part Of Your Body-You Can Let It Go” on Huffpost, hit me as to just how obsessed we have become with something that was supposed to be made out in something so simple, yet we find ourselves struggling to be away from it.  A lot of today's society has become glued to their cell phones.  I have slowly become part of that society.  I am constantly checking my phone.  Even when I am doing my homework and hear my phone go off, I'll check it.  Another article I discovered from Huffpost was Emma Stein’s “Is Social Media Dependence A Mental Issue?"  Emma Stein began her article with a matter I wasn't aware of.  A 19 year old boy in the UK went and committed suicide after being obsessed with taking too many "selfies."  Emma began to give her reasons as to why she feels technology and the social world were once a good thing, but now turning out to be bad.  This article will be helpful when writing my paper because it puts a twist and adds the medial/psychological effects of social media addiction.

            Lastly, this next category includes the dangers that follow with the excessive amount of time spent on cell phones.  We have begun to hear it all.  Texting while driving, cyber bullying, unsafe sites, and more.  I came across quite a few articles that consisted of accidents occurred while texting and driving and surveys done with students admitting to being on their phone while they drive.  Stephanie Hanes’ "Texting Caused Total 'Distracted Driving' Deaths To Rise, Study Finds" goes onto give the dangers of texting while driving and how it has now become the most cause for accidents here in the U.S.  Another texting while driving article “U.S. Teens Frightening Levels of Texting While Driving" done by Ashley Halsey, goes onto provide me with more of a survey type aspect.  Studies show it's the new "drunk driving."  A quarter of teens say they text while driving and about half ages 12 to 17, say they've been in cars with someone texting behind the wheel.  I hope to figure a way to tie the dangers of texting and driving in with my research paper.  More and more dangers sites are starting to come about and some teens are finding themselves in trouble because of it.  Julia Angwin’s “Parental Guidance: How Safe Are Social Networking Sites For Teens?”says majority of the sites weren't safe to go on, especially for young teens and could find themselves in danger on certain ones.  The world is becoming a dangerous place, to include the social media world.  To wrap up the dangers of social networking, I discovered an article on The Washington Post.  Donna St. George’s “The Silent Weapon In Dating Violence: Texting" was a danger I never really expected to come out of texting.  It goes onto talk about the harassment that some couples face with their significant other and their reactions when they don't receive a text back.  It had put a twist but still related to my topic and what an addiction the social world has become. 

            In conclusion, I want to get across the reasoning why I chose this topic in the first place.  A lot of people complain about what technology has begun to do to society but in reality, it is the people that have led society to become this way.  We have all somehow contributed to how the world is today.  There are many problems that have arose because how people, myself included have let technology take over.  I have mentioned before, I don’t feel we should cut technology completely, but just not allow it to take up so much of our time.  These four categories help show the rapid growth and technology and the takeover that has begun. 

           

Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 17's reading went over the process of revise and editing.  Revising involves rethinking and re-envisioning your document.  During the revising process be sure to consider your writing situation, consider your arguments and ideas, consider your use and integration of sources, consider the structure and organization, and lastly consider the genre and design.  When revising, it is helpful to imagine how your readers will react to your document and to ask questions as you go along.  When revising, you'll first want to check the clarity of your thesis statement.  Strategies you should use to revise include saving multiple drafts, highlight your main point, reasons, and evidence, challenge your assumptions, scan, outline, and map your document, and ask for feedback.  As you begin to edit your document, you should focus on five categories.  Focus on accuracy, economy, consistency, style, and spelling, grammar, and punctuation.  Strategies to use as you edit consist of reading carefully, mark and search your document, use spelling, grammar, and style tools, carefully and ask for feedback.  Reading aloud is a good use of time.  Reading aloud allows you to help find problems that you may not have found when reading silently.  As you come across errors, highlight specific problems.  These are all useful tools to help you through the revise and editing process.

In Class Lab- Outline Draft

For my research paper, I would like to make known the overuse of technology in today's society.  Whether we choose to believe it or not, technology has become in a sense a form of addiction.  Social networking has become very popular over this past decade, more so in the last five years.  A lot of people, today's generation especially, seem to fill a void when going online and texting.  People have gotten so caught up with what's going on in the social world rather than face reality and experience the real world. Nowadays you go out to eat at a restaurant and you begin to wonder *What's the point really?*  I look around and see everyone hooked on their phones rather than carry on conversations with the company they’re with.  I've caught myself even out to dinner with family/friends and not being able to put my phone down for that short amount of time out of the day that should be spent with one another.  People, teens especially are having trouble carrying conversations because they don't have that time to come up with something witty to whereas during text or online, they would.  During face to face conversations, it is completely opposite though.  Once you say something, you can't erase it and start over.  You no longer have that ability.

What I hope to get across is the abuse of technology and that it is a disease in its own form.  Social networking is tearing us down little by little.  Today's society, myself included, has let it begin to take over.  It'll only get worse because sadly, we will let it.  There was a time when social networking cease to exist.  I'm not saying it should go back to that point, but it definitely shouldn't be made as a top priority anymore.

I have gone back and forth for a while now wondering what this world would be like if social networking didn't exist like once before.  What would we be doing?  How would we be staying connected with one another?  Would we be smarter than we are now?  Would we get a lot more accomplished?  All these questions and more have come to mind.  In a previous English class I had, we were assigned to read an article in a book called America Now.  Shawn Ghuman did a fine job explaining the effects of technology and what social networking is making of us.  Ever since reading that piece, I have begun to question technology today.  There was a time when Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, Tumblr, Pinterest, and more didn't even cross our minds because well, they weren't around.  Not to say those sites aren't fun to go on but it has gotten out of hand.  You have shows today pointing towards the cons of what social networking is doing to us.  Accidents are being caused by texting and driving, you see it on the news every day.  I read an article in the Elite Daily by Paul Hudson, "Why Your Cell Phone Is Ruining Your Life."  Hudson went onto say even the busy streets of New York City are becoming quieter due to the excessive amount of time spent on our phones.  If the city that never sleeps is becoming quiet, what's next?  Just a couple days ago a book called "iDisorder" caught my eye so hopefully I will find some useful sources out of there.  We, eat breathe, and sleep technology and I plan to make it known rather than stay in denial any longer.  My plan of attack is to continue gathering more information for my sources in books and online as well.

I.)                 I believe society is slowly finding themselves in trouble with the over rule of technology.

II.)              Social networking has escalated into a whole new aspect.  Something that once was fun has become an addiction. 

III.)           Today’s world once managed without social networking and cell phones.  I am not saying the world should go back to that again, but needs to be done in moderation. 

IV.)           Social networking is creating multiple issues for people, especially teenagers.  Their communication skills are slowly becoming destroyed and leads them to problems later in life.

A.)  I have come across quite a few sources that back up my topic.  Both books mentioned in my literature review and annotated bibliography, talk about things that are easy to side with when talking about what society is becoming with the excessive amount of social networking. 

B.)  Although I didn’t side with everything Richard Alleyne mentioned in his article, I found his work quite useful when discussing the addiction that has been created with cell phones and the consistent checking on social network sites.  People are risking relationships with one another over something so small that has escalated so big.

C.)  Social networking sites have become a danger to today’s society.  Julia Angwin was a useful source when it came to describing the dangers of social networking and how nowadays it’s safer to have parents monitor what their kids are doing.

D.)  In America Now, Shawn Ghuman brought up some very good points that I agreed with.  Ghuman brought up the matter on people feeling awkward when making eye contact and having to talk face to face with their peers.

E.)   I haven’t found any sources I completely disagree with, but there are a couple that don’t “nail” my topic in the way I am shooting for and that may later create problems if I carry through with them.

Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 13 went over ways in organizing your paper.  Organizing patterns provide an overall principle for arranging your argument and research writing project document.  There are lists of different patterns to go about.  Chronology, description, definition, cause/effect, process explanation, pro/con, multiple perspectives, compare/contrast, strengths/weaknesses, costs/benefits, and problem/solution.  Your choice of organizing pattern will reflect your purpose and the roles you develop as a writer.  Once you have decided on an  organizing pattern, you can go about using strategies such as labeling, grouping, clustering, and mapping to determine how to present your argument.  Labeling can help you understand how and where you will use the evidence gathered from your sources.  Mapping is useful when you explore sequences of reasons and evidence.  An outline is important towards your paper.  When creating an outline, it represents the sequence in which your reasons and evidence will appear.  There is both formal and informal outlines.  Formal outlines provide an accurate list of points addressed towards your paper.  Informal outlines on the other hand take many forms.  For example, brief list of words, short phrases, or series of sentences.  The most common types of formal outlines are topical and sentence outlines.  Topical outlines present both topics and subtopics.  Sentence outlines use complete sentences to identify the points that want to be covered.  I plan to stay organized throughout the process of my paper.

Annotated Bibliography

Ghuman, Shawn.  "Is Technology Destroying Social Bonds?" America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals. Ed.  Robert Atwan.  Boston: Bedford St. Martins, 2013. Print.

  
In Shawn Ghuman's reading, he goes onto tell the drastic change over the past decade regarding technology.  Social media has its own new meaning now.  It was once something fun and has now become an addiction.  The excessive use of technology has created many issues in today's society.  You can't seem to go out to dinner without seeing people glued to their phone.  Conversations become awkward because people just aren't use to having a face to face discussion with someone.  Technology as we know it, is taking over. 

Kutcher, Ashton.  "Has Texting Killed Romance?"  America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals. Ed. Robert Atwan. Boston: Bedford St. Matins, 2013. Print.  

Actor, producer, and co-founder of Katalyst Media, Ashton Kutcher shares his thoughts on how cell phones and texting have become at an all time high.  Kutcher goes onto say that it used to be a boy and a girl met, exchanged numbers, anticipation built, call was made, had hours upon hours of conversation over the phone, then a date was arranged and went from there.  Now instead of calling, we text because silence over the phone is eliminated.  Instead of going over and comforting the person you care for, you send a sweet touching text or write on their Facebook wall, etc.  Society has become so caught up in technology and the overuse of cell phones and I plan to prove that.

Rosen, Christine. "Electronic Intimacy" America Now: Short Readings from Recent Periodicals. Ed. Robert Atwan. Boston: Bedford St. Martins, 2013. Print.

Writer and editor, Christine Rosen shares her feelings on the pros and cons of social                     networking and what an addiction it has become.  I am beginning to catch myself getting caught up in what seems to be so little of a problem, but in reality is escalating into an issue that can destroy us.  I plan to use Rosen's piece and tie it into my thoughts.

Rosen, Larry. iDisorder: Understanding Our Obsession With Technology And Overcoming Its Hold On Us. New York: St. Martins, 2013. Print.

Larry Rosen is an expert specifically in the field of Psychology of Technology.  He goes onto say how technology is too much for the human mind to handle.  This book will be useful to my paper because almost every chapter links up and clicks with what I hope to gain from my research.  

Glasser, Mark. MediaShift Your Guide to the Digital Media Revolution.“How Cell Phones Are Killing Fact-to-Face Conversations.” PBS Publications. Web. 22 Oct. 2007.

Mark Glasser's article will contribute a lot of useful information towards my paper with his thoughts on how are conversations are slowly being killed with one another due to the use of technology.

Hassan, Yasmin. Elite Daily The Voice of Generation-Y. “How Technology Continues to Destroy A 

Social Generation.” Web. 25 Oct. 2013.

In Hassan's article, I at first thought I would gain a lot from her thoughts and what she had to say.  Although I agree with some of the things mentioned, I feel it won't contribute a whole lot towards my paper. 

Alleyne, Richard. The Telegraph. “Mobile Phone Addiction Ruining Relationships.” Telegraph Media Group Publications.  Web. 30 Nov. 2012

Richard Alleyne's article will be useful towards my paper because his thoughts are aligned a lot with mine.  All sorts of relationships are slowly being destroyed due to the addiction people have started to have withe their cell phones.  

Piper, Robert.  Huffpost.  "Your Cell Phone Is Not A Part Of Your Body-You Can Let It Go.”  The Huffington Post Publications.  Web.  24 Sept. 2013.

A lot of today's society has become glued to their cell phones.  I have slowly become part of that society.  I am constantly checking my phone.  Even when I am doing my homework and hear my phone go off, I'll check it.

Iydiaborah. Digital Media. "Is Technology Taking Over?" Web. 9 Sept. 2009.

In Iydiaborah's blog, a few points hit on my topic, but for the most part I didn't feel overly confident about using this source towards my paper.  If I were to use this source, it would be one of my last options.
 
Anqwin, Julia. "Parental Guidance: How Safe Are Social Networking Sites For Teens?  We Take Them For A Test Run." The Wall Street Journal. (2006): 10. Proquest. Web. 28 Oct. 2014.

In The Wall Street Journal, this article informs its readers on all the different sites located online.  Majority of them weren't safe to go on, especially for young teens and could find themselves in danger on certain ones.  The world is becoming a danger place, to include the social media world.  I will aim to include the dangers of social media sites in today's society.

Hanes, Stephanie.  "Texting Caused Total 'Distracted Driving' Deaths To Rise, Study Finds." The Christian Science Monitor. (2010): 1-11. Proquest. Web. 28 Oct. 2014.

This article goes onto talk about the dangers of texting while driving and how it has now become the most cause for accidents here in the U.S.  This can be a helpful source when arguing my point. 

Halsey, Ashley. "U.S. Teens Frightening Levels of Texting While Driving." The Washington Post. (2009) Proquest. Web. 28 Oct. 2014.

Another texting while driving article.  Studies show it's the new "drunk driving."  A quarter of teens say they text while driving and about half ages 12 to 17, say they've been in cars with someone texting behind the wheel.  I hope to figure a way to tie the dangers of texting and driving in with my research paper.

George, Donna St. "The Silent Weapon In Dating Violence: Texting." The Washington Post. (2010) Proquest. Web. 28 Oct. 2014.

This article in The Washington Post, had a little twist to it in regards of my topic but still managed to get the point across with the cell phone addiction.  It goes onto talk about the harassment that some couples face with their significant other and their reactions when they don't receive a text back.

Lupsa, Crisitan. "A Campus Fad Becomes A Fact..." The Christian Science Monitor. (2006): 13. Proquest. Web. 28 Oct. 2014. 

The famous social networking site; Facebook, doesn't seem to be having a rapid growth like how it once was because everyone seems to already be on it.  Links right up with one of the main social networking sites I plan on including in my paper.

Almendrala, Anna. Huffpost. "Our Creepy Attachment To Cell Phone Could Be An Addiction." The Huffington Post Publications. Web. 5 Sept. 2014.

Almendrala made some good points on the excessive use of cell phones.  One of her examples given was about students paying all this money for classes, and spending all their time on their phones rather than listen to their professor.  I can use this towards my paper when explaining the disrespect that goes along with being on your phone 24/7.

Wallace, Kelly. Digital Life. "How To Cut Your Kids' Cell Phone Addiction." CNN Publications. Web. 7 Oct. 2014.

At first, I was a little skeptical of this article.  After reading it though I came across a few different types of cell phone addictions.  One was on a five year old who doesn't even have one, but would live on it if she could.  The constant looking over her friends shoulders as they played games or checked their Instagram.  My ten year old brother can't seem to get off his iPad wherever we go.  He has been begging for a phone (iPhone more so), for over a year now.  Is that what this world has come to?  Society is being taken over and people are failing to realize it.  I plan to get my point across when writing my paper.

Stein, Emma. Huffpost. "Is Social Media Dependence A Mental Issue?" Huffington Post Publicaitons. Web. 7 May. 2014.

Emma Stein began her article with a matter I wasn't aware of.  A 19 year old boy in the UK went and committed suicide after being obsessed with taking too many "selfies."  Emma began to give her reasons as to why she feels technology and the social world were once a good thing, but now turning out to be bad.  This article will be helpful when writing my paper because it puts a twist and adds the medial/psychological affects of social media addiction.

Augenbraun, Ellen. CBS News. "How Real A Risk Is Social Media Addiction." CBS Publications. Web. 22 Aug. 2014.

This article talks about the symptoms of social media addiction, especially leading towards Facebook.  Some things mentioned in the article, the symptoms for example can be useful towards my paper.  The rest of the information didn't seem like it would be that helpful when it comes down to arguing my point.

Mosley, Tonya. Seattle Refined. "4 Signs You're Addicted To Your Cell Phone." Sinclair Interactive Media. Web. 22 Jul. 2014.

I like how the article in Seattle Refined, gave four signs of being addicted to your cell phone because, well I was guilty in this matter.  Each sign described exactly what I do and although I laughed, it isn't funny when it comes down to it.  This source will be effective towards my paper because I will be able to bring the signs of addiction in with my argument as well as ways listed to help the addiction.

Whiteman, Honor. MNT. "Is Cell Phone Addiction On The Horizon?" Medical News Today. Web. 1 Sept. 2014.

Whiteman goes onto say studies show that 60% of high school students admit to being addicted to their cell phones and become frustrated when it is not nearby.  This source will be helpful towards my paper because I can use calculations provided on the addictions of cell phone use and how addiction is no longer just a term used for drugs and alcohol.